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The Rumi You've Been Quoting Isn't Rumi

“Listen to this reed, how it laments”: the ney, cut from the reed bed, telling a tale of separation.

The most quoted mystic on Instagram was a Muslim scholar who called himself the servant of the Qur'an. Here is what he actually wrote, word by word.

The most-quoted mystic you've never read

Rumi is often called the best-selling poet in America. His lines are on mugs, wedding invitations and a thousand sunset photos. Most of them share one thing: you will not find a word about God, prayer or Islam in them.

That is not because Rumi didn't write about those things. He wrote about almost nothing else.

Jalal al-Din Muhammad Rumi (1207–1273) was a Muslim scholar who taught Islamic law and preached in the mosque before he ever became a poet. His great work, the Masnavi, is so full of the Qur'an that later readers called it "the Qur'an in Persian". Much of the famous English "Rumi" comes from free versions written by poets who don't read Persian, working from older scholarly translations. Some of it can be traced back to a real poem. Some of it can't be traced to anything Rumi wrote at all.

The New Yorker called it "the erasure of Islam from the poetry of Rumi". This article is a small step the other way. Four passages, in the original Persian, translated exactly.

Take the Qur'an out of Rumi and you keep the movie but throw away the projector.

About these texts

How to read the passages

Each passage has the Persian, a transliteration, and a simple guide to how it sounds in modern Persian (capitals show the stressed syllable). Open Word by word for the meaning of each word. The translation follows the Persian closely and adds nothing.

1. The Song of the Reed

The Masnavi doesn't begin with God, or with Rumi. It begins with a sound: the ney, the reed flute whose sound is at the heart of the Mevlevi ceremony of the "whirling dervishes".

The Masnavi, Book One, lines 1–2

بشنو این نی چون شکایت می‌کند
از جدایی‌ها حکایت می‌کند
کز نیستان تا مرا ببریده‌اند
در نفیرم مرد و زن نالیده‌اند

bishnaw īn nay chūn shikāyat mī-kunad
az judāyī-hā ḥikāyat mī-kunad
k-az nayistān tā ma-rā bubrīda-and
dar nafīr-am mard u zan nālīda-and

How to say it

bish-NAW een NAY choon shi-kaa-YAT mee-ku-NAD
az ju-daa-YEE-haa hi-kaa-YAT mee-ku-NAD
kaz nay-is-TAAN taa ma-RAA bub-ree-DA-and
dar na-FEE-ram MARD-u ZAN naa-lee-DA-and

Word by word
bishnaw
listen
īn nay
this reed (the ney, the reed flute)
chūn
how
shikāyat
complaint, lament
mī-kunad
it makes
az
of, about
judāyī-hā
separations
ḥikāyat
a tale, a story
k-az
saying: since (from)
nayistān
the reed bed
tā
ever since
ma-rā bubrīda-and
they cut me
dar nafīr-am
in my cry
mard u zan
men and women
nālīda-and
have wept, have moaned

TranslationListen to this reed, how it laments, telling a tale of separations: "Ever since they cut me from the reed bed, men and women have wept in my cry."

Some editions, including R. A. Nicholson's, swap the two rhyme words in the first couplet ("how it tells a tale, complaining of separations"). The meaning is the same.

The reed was cut from the reed bed. Its music is the sound of that separation, and everyone who hears it weeps because they recognise the feeling. Muslim readers have always heard the Qur'an behind it: إنا لله وإنا إليه راجعون, "To God we belong, and to Him we return" (Qur'an 2:156). The longing is not a problem to fix. It is a memory of where we came from.

2. "I am the servant of the Qur'an"

If you only read one Rumi poem in the original, make it this one. It is the quatrain the Instagram Rumi never shows you.

Quatrain: "I am the servant of the Qur'an"

من بندهٔ قرآنم اگر جان دارم
من خاک ره محمد مختارم
گر نقل کند جز این کس از گفتارم
بیزارم از او وز این سخن بیزارم

man banda-yi qur'ān-am agar jān dāram
man khāk-i rah-i muḥammad-i mukhtār-am
gar naql kunad juz īn kas az guftār-am
bīzār-am az ū w-az īn sukhan bīzār-am

How to say it

man ban-DA-ye qor-AA-nam a-GAR jaan daa-RAM
man KHAA-ke ra-HE mo-HAM-ma-de mokh-TAA-ram
gar NAQL ko-NAD jooz EEN kas az gof-TAA-ram
bee-ZAA-ram az OO va-zeen so-KHAN bee-ZAA-ram

Word by word
man
I
banda
servant
qur'ān
the Qur'an
agar jān dāram
as long as I have life (literally: if I have a soul)
khāk
dust
rah
path (one manuscript tradition reads dar, door)
muḥammad-i mukhtār
Muhammad, the Chosen one
gar naql kunad
if (anyone) reports
juz īn
anything other than this
kas
anyone
az guftār-am
from my words
bīzār-am az ū
I disown him
w-az īn sukhan
and these words
bīzār
sick of, quit of

TranslationAs long as I have life, I am the servant of the Qur'an. I am the dust on the path of Muhammad, the Chosen one. If anyone reports anything else from my words, I disown him, and I disown those words.

Quatrain no. 1173 in Gamard and Farhadi's The Quatrains of Rumi; no. 1330 on Ganjoor. The printed text reads dar (door); the Konya manuscript reads rah (path).

Read the last line again. Rumi warns that anyone who quotes him for anything other than this, he disowns.

3. The field beyond "rightdoing and wrongdoing"

You've probably seen this one: "Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I'll meet you there." It is lovely. Here is what the Persian says.

Quatrain: the original of "there is a field"

از کفر و ز اسلام برون صحرائیست
ما را به میان آن فضا سودائیست
عارف چو بدان رسید سر را بنهد
نه کفر و نه اسلام و نه آنجا جائیست

az kufr u z-islām birūn ṣaḥrā'īst
mā-rā ba-miyān-i ān faḍā sawdā'īst
'ārif chu bad-ān rasīd sar-rā binihad
na kufr u na islām u na ānjā jā'īst

How to say it

az KOFR-o ze-es-LAAM bi-ROON sah-raa-EEST
MAA-raa ba-mi-YAA-ne aan fa-ZAA sow-daa-EEST
AA-ref cho ba-DAAN ra-SEED SAR-raa bi-ni-HAD
na KOFR-o na es-LAAM-o na AAN-jaa jaa-EEST

Word by word
az kufr
beyond unbelief (from unbelief)
z-islām
and from Islam
birūn
outside, beyond
ṣaḥrā'īst
there is a desert plain, an open field
mā-rā
for us, we have
ba-miyān-i ān faḍā
in the midst of that open space
sawdā
a passion, an all-consuming longing
'ārif
the knower of God, the gnostic
chu bad-ān rasīd
when he reaches it
sar-rā binihad
lays down his head (in prostration)
na kufr u na islām
neither unbelief nor Islam
na ānjā jā'īst
nor is there any "where" there

TranslationBeyond unbelief and Islam there is a desert plain. In the midst of that open space, we have a passion. When the knower of God reaches it, he lays his head down in prostration. There is neither unbelief nor Islam there, nor any "where".

Quatrain no. 395 in Gamard and Farhadi; no. 157 on Ganjoor. The popular English version keeps the field and drops the prostration.

So the original is more daring than the English, not less. Rumi names Islam itself, and points to a place of union where even the words "believer" and "unbeliever" fall away. But look at what the knower does there: he lays his head on the ground. Sujud, prostration, is the most intimate posture of Muslim prayer. The field is not beyond devotion. It is where devotion becomes total.

4. "Come, come, whoever you are"

This may be the most famous "Rumi" line of all, and it is printed at the entrance of countless retreats. The English usually runs: "Come, come, whoever you are, wanderer, worshipper, lover of leaving." The Persian is different, and it isn't Rumi's.

Quatrain: the original of "Come, come, whoever you are"

باز آ باز آ هر آنچه هستی باز آ
گر کافر و گبر و بت‌پرستی باز آ
این درگه ما درگه نومیدی نیست
صد بار اگر توبه شکستی باز آ

bāz ā bāz ā har ān-chi hastī bāz ā
gar kāfir u gabr u but-parastī bāz ā
īn dargah-i mā dargah-i nawmīdī nīst
ṣad bār agar tawba shikastī bāz ā

How to say it

BAAZ aa, BAAZ aa, har AAN-che has-TEE BAAZ aa
gar KAA-fer-o GABR-o bot-pa-ras-TEE BAAZ aa
EEN dar-ga-HE MAA dar-ga-HE na-o-mee-DEE NEEST
SAD baar a-GAR tow-BA she-kas-TEE BAAZ aa

Word by word
bāz ā
come back, return
har ān-chi hastī
whatever you are
gar
even if
kāfir
an unbeliever
gabr
a Zoroastrian (an old term, often used dismissively)
but-parast
an idol-worshipper
īn dargah-i mā
this court (doorway) of ours
dargah-i nawmīdī nīst
is not a court of despair
ṣad bār
a hundred times
tawba
repentance, the turning back to God
shikastī
you have broken

TranslationCome back, come back, whatever you are, come back. Even if you are an unbeliever, a Zoroastrian or an idol-worshipper, come back. This court of ours is not a court of despair. Even if you have broken your repentance a hundred times, come back.

This quatrain is not found in Rumi's own collection. It belongs to the quatrains attributed to Abu Sa'id Abi'l-Khayr, a Sufi master who died in 1049, more than 150 years before Rumi was born (no. 1 on Ganjoor's Abu Sa'id page).

The key word is tawba: repentance, literally "turning back". The original is not a door that asks nothing of you. It is a door that is never closed to the one who turns back, however many times they have failed. That is a deeply Qur'anic idea: لا تقنطوا من رحمة الله, "Do not despair of the mercy of God" (Qur'an 39:53).

Popular version or original?

Popular

A Rumi with no God, no Qur'an and no prayer, who sounds like a modern self-help writer.

Original

A Muslim mystic who calls himself the servant of the Qur'an and the dust on the Prophet's path, and who finds union with God through love, longing and prostration.

What's lost

The source. The longing in Rumi always points somewhere: back to God, the reed bed. Remove that, and the longing has nowhere to go.

My reflection: the reed and the lightbox

This section is my own reading, not part of Rumi's text or of Islamic teaching.

When I read the Song of the Reed, I hear the Projector Theory in another language. The reed bed is the lightbox, the Source. The cut is the moment of separation that makes an individual life possible. The music is everything we feel because of it: the longing, the restlessness, the sense that something is missing even when life is full.

Most people try to silence that music. Rumi says listen to it. The ache is not proof that something is wrong with you. It is proof of where you came from.

That is also why the edited Rumi feels thin after a while. It keeps the feeling and throws away its source. It is a movie with the projector taken out. Respecting where a teaching comes from is not a restriction on it. It is what keeps the light in it.

How it can help

What the texts say

Rumi's reed says longing is the sign of a lost origin, and that the one who has been separated recognises others who have been separated too. The quatrain of return says no failure closes the door: "even if you have broken your repentance a hundred times, come back." In the words of the texts, the way home is always open.

How the tradition uses them

What the practice does

Slow listening, to music or to a line of poetry read aloud, gathers scattered attention and lengthens the breath, which many people find calming. The idea of returning without self-punishment may also help with the inner criticism that so often follows a "failed" practice. You wandered, you notice, you come back.

Reading and reflection are spiritual practices. They may support calm and self-understanding, but they are not medical or psychological treatment. If you are struggling, please also reach out to a qualified professional.

A practice: listening like the reed

This is my own practice, inspired by the texts above. It is not a Sufi ritual.

  1. Sit quietly and play a recording of the ney for three minutes, or read the first couplet of the Masnavi aloud, slowly, three times.
  2. Notice where in your body the longing lives: chest, throat, belly.
  3. Don't fix it. Just listen to it, the way you would listen to music.
  4. Each time your mind wanders, come back, without scolding yourself. Return is the practice.

Try it for 21 days and write one line each evening about what the longing seemed to point towards.

Frequently asked

Was Rumi a Muslim?

Yes. Jalal al-Din Rumi (1207–1273) was a Muslim scholar, a teacher of Islamic law and a preacher before he became famous as a poet. His poetry is full of the Qur'an and the sayings of the Prophet Muhammad, and he wrote that he was "the servant of the Qur'an".

Did Rumi write "Come, come, whoever you are"?

No. The Persian original is a quatrain attributed to the earlier Sufi master Abu Sa'id Abi'l-Khayr, who died in 1049, and it is not part of Rumi's own collection. It is an invitation to return in repentance, "even if you have broken your repentance a hundred times".

Did Rumi write "Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field"?

It is a free English version of a Rumi quatrain. The Persian says "beyond unbelief and Islam there is a desert plain", and that the knower of God who reaches it lays his head down in prostration. The English version drops both the religious words and the prostration.

What is the Masnavi?

Rumi's great teaching poem: six books and roughly 25,000 couplets of stories and reflections on the soul's return to God, drawing constantly on the Qur'an. It opens with the reed flute's lament of separation.

Can non-Muslims read and love Rumi?

Of course. Rumi is read and loved across the world. The point of this article is simply to read him as he wrote, with the faith his words came from, rather than a version with it removed.

Who checked these translations?

The Persian text was checked against Ganjoor's edition, and the translations follow the scholarly translations of Ibrahim Gamard, Ravan Farhadi and R. A. Nicholson. If you read Persian and spot an error, please tell me and I'll correct it.

Sources and a note on accuracy

The Persian of all four passages was checked word by word against Ganjoor. Translations are my own, following the scholarly translations listed below; where manuscripts differ, the notes say so. The two Qur'an references are given in Arabic without vowel marks and translated for their meaning, as Muslim scholars describe any translation of the Qur'an. If you read Persian or Arabic and see something to correct, please write to me.

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